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Supergirl :)

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:iconthe-batcomputer:
Let me start off by saying this is a great piece. Supergirl is one of the most often drawn superheroines out there, but yours truly stands out.

The excellent linework allows the posture and expression created here to mix with the subtle coloring to giver her an understated (but undeniable) sense of strength and confidence. You have made her attractive without this just falling into the "sexy Supergirl" category. The lighting is evocative and really evokes a sense of three dimensions.

The only negative I could bring would be the lack of a background, but since I appreciate a good figure drawing, that doesn’t really even bother me.
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:iconspacecowboytv:
Well I think is this one of my favorites you've done. I think her pose works good for the comicbook nature. As I'm been studying comic book poses lately having her forearms flexed is really important and I'm getting that here. The detail in her hair seems at just the right level for the minimalistic style you have in the rest of her body. I think her eyes really stand out. I am pulled into her gaze from the dark outlines and eye lashes you have. The small shadow off of her rib line is appropriate for relaying the form of the pose. My only area that I would consider needing revision is that if you are going for the current supergirl her skirt should be blue and have ruffles like a cheerleader skirt would have. I think this skirt might be a bit short and bland.

Over all I love this piece. I can't get over her hair and eyes. Its one of my favorites!
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:iconloki-lou:
Fantastic lighting!
:iconukela:
man! great work. how do you get such perfect lines!?
:iconjoshyartist:
Awesome supergirl i'd give you an awesome critique but DA seems to think you need a subscription to have an "advanced" opinion

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:iconthawk:
Very beautiful colors!!

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:icongermancitygirl:
Wow, she's fantastic.

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:iconvika8d:
Her face and hair look awesome!
:iconbwanasimba:
Awesome work.

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:iconangel-ink:
Killer render! :omg: Nicely done! :thumbsup:

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:iconmagneticheat:
Wow...just wow man. It looks so damn good. I dig it.
:iconkebeca1690:
Gorgeous, love this supergirl a lot

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